Precious realestate refers to the idea that you do not need to have two lines of text in the room when all the information can be expressed into one line. Call it what you like, efficiency, lack of annoyance, etc. I think most people should be able to comprehend the general gist of the argument here.
I am a supporter of pure information. If additional "unnecessary" information is to be provided, I think it should be more welcoming and fun, and less advertisey.
The point of my original post was to break down the radio announcement to the *absolute essentials* ... and go from there. Someday we might even want to add more functionality to the announcement.
The goal here and my main reason for replying to this is to keep the announcement under one line.
Cenacle your revised version is getting there, but unfortunately is still two lines. What can be removed and still preserve the functionality?
I am a supporter of pure information. If additional "unnecessary" information is to be provided, I think it should be more welcoming and fun, and less advertisey.
The point of my original post was to break down the radio announcement to the *absolute essentials* ... and go from there. Someday we might even want to add more functionality to the announcement.
The goal here and my main reason for replying to this is to keep the announcement under one line.
Cenacle your revised version is getting there, but unfortunately is still two lines. What can be removed and still preserve the functionality?